Memories
This photo is a reminder of the great grandfather I had, he was the best! I don’t have very pictures of him, because he didn't like it very much so I keep carefully every single of them.
I took this photo with my cellphone very years ago but I can’t remember when exactly. In the picture is my grandfather with a hat and a tie that my brother and my cousin put him while he just let us do it what we want.
Like every summer, my brother, my cousin and I went to my grandparents house to spend ours vacations with them. In the nights we used to play cards and share a wonderful moment together, and this photo is about one of those night, a very special one.
My grandfather was very special for all of us and since he died of cancer almost six years ago, he used to remember him through pictures like this. I really like this image because is one of my best memories with him, a nice memory of my childhood and the relation I have with all my family. 
ResponderBorrarI totally understand you! The only grandmother I met also died of cancer, however I have the best memories of her!<3
Your grandfather rock girl! He's look very funny in the pic haha
ResponderBorrarYour grandfather rock girl! He's look very funny in the pic haha
ResponderBorrarWhat a beautiful memory! keep it forever💗
ResponderBorraraww your grandfather is very sweet and I know he´ll always be with you <3
ResponderBorrarNice and moving text, the overall message is clear and there is some minor inconcistencies which do not affect overall understanding.
ResponderBorrarHowever, at times the text may be incoherent due to either grammar or lexical mistakes. Check below:
Corrections:
I don’t have very pictures= I don't have MANY pictures.
very years ago= MANY years ago.
what we want= what we WANTED TO.
he used to remember him through pictures like this= I don't really understand who you are talking about. Check the coherence of this sentence.
T: 2,5, L: 1,5, G: 2,5= 6,5 points.
Grade: 5,0